Hello! I don't know you, and you don't know me... But as I stumbled upon this deviation, I just had to give a critique!
Vision: Over all, I'll say that I can see the image clearly. However, the 'r' in the "Now I'll return the favour" is somewhat hard to see, but that doesn't really count now does it? Originality: Okay... I see way too many of these split screen, split personality things. It's a common theme, but the expression and style is pretty unique. Technique: I understand that you were playing around with effects. That's understandable, no worries~ The drawing itself looks flat, but the background adds depth to the drawing, which I like. Impact: Over all it's a very nice piece. I love the expression and details. Everything is simply stunning~ Great job! (I am horrid at giving critiques. orz)
It's really good. The fire on the right side looks well blended and the idea of the lighting suits the perspective of the writing. You could have used more on the left side to make it equal to the right sides fire and evil eyes in the BG. Many people have done these but this one is really great. It's great but there's more you probably could have done with it. The words on the right side could have been a little better in terms of view cause if the words on the left wasn't there I wouldn't have noticed those at first Other than that I like it a lot and I'm sure others like it too.