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Repaying Debts by HailsynVulpes Repaying Debts by HailsynVulpes
Ninth from the past and current Ninth. XP

Idk, I'm bored. This was kinda done lazily...still playing around with effects...XD
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Hello! I don't know you, and you don't know me... But as I stumbled upon this deviation, I just had to give a critique!

Vision: Over all, I'll say that I can see the image clearly. However, the 'r' in the "Now I'll return the favour" is somewhat hard to see, but that doesn't really count now does it?
Originality: Okay... I see way too many of these split screen, split personality things. It's a common theme, but the expression and style is pretty unique.
Technique: I understand that you were playing around with effects. That's understandable, no worries~ The drawing itself looks flat, but the background adds depth to the drawing, which I like.
Impact: Over all it's a very nice piece. I love the expression and details. Everything is simply stunning~ Great job!
(I am horrid at giving critiques. orz)
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It's really good. The fire on the right side looks well blended and the idea of the lighting suits the perspective of the writing. You could have used more on the left side to make it equal to the right sides fire and evil eyes in the BG. Many people have done these but this one is really great. It's great but there's more you probably could have done with it. The words on the right side could have been a little better in terms of view cause if the words on the left wasn't there I wouldn't have noticed those at first Other than that I like it a lot and I'm sure others like it too. :D
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Crypt96 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
FAVOUR RETURNED HUE HUE HUE HUE HUE
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Dunne43 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Sweet!!! Freaky-Scary!! Lol(get point?)!! Just to clear things up, the white is to represent death, or fear?
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ShinyZorua24 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
I reread the story of Ninth's past in flipnotes and I just learn her real name was Raven.
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ShinyZorua24 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Also can you make a story about her past plz.
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ShinyZorua24 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Um I'm always wondering on the flipnote heart breaker when Zero breaks up with a vulpix or something I've been wondering if that is Ninth as a vulpix,but good job.
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datviperfangs Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool
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kittydoseminecraft Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
who!creepypasta
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ohmygodfluffy Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: *runs away* im not involved!!! :iconnoodlearmsplz: *smacks face first into a glass tank* nevermind...im doomed....
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BZ-Volt Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awsome picture im a fan of yours on hatena
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TheOfficialBlazie Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Artist
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Epicaaaal eUe (Lol, can't find anything smart or anything to say) XD
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